2nd Draft

I've actually gotten some ideas for things to add to my script to expand it a bit that I'm excited about. I know my ending is too anti-climactic so I still have to work on that but right now I'm going back to the beginning and weaving in the new stuff. Hopefully that will help me come to a natural conclusion with more excitement.

2nd Draft

I'm editing my second draft, which is infinitely more fun for me than finishing the first draft. Now that I have all the crap out in the open I can tease out some okay stuff. My first draft was seriously under the page limit but I've written out a scene that was omitted plus some edits that have me over. I am perpetually overly brief with things. I need to expand.

Neglect

I've neglected my blog in the wake of my furious writing. I did not write as much last week as I intended, so I've had to make up for it this week. Unfortunately I was sick for a few days, so that didn't help, but in the end it was procrastination that did me in. It shall not conquer me again.

On the upside, I found some amusing Medieval riddles that sound dirty but aren't. I injected them in my script, whether or not that was a good thing I will find out soon enough.